Hello! Today I’m going to tell you what I would do if I could do anything and it was my parents’ birthdays!
If it was my mother’s birthday, I’d…
Bake a beautiful delicious cake
When she’s finished, it’s her I’d take
To watch any movie she’d wish to see
Then go to a restaurant by the sea
After that she’d surf the net
And maybe get her a dog for a pet.
If it were my father’s birthday…
I’d give him some cupcakes, a hundred or more
When he’d be done, I’d give him more
I’d let him watch TV all day
And give him more candy, I say
I would let him play golf all the time
Then give him a trillion dollars(and a dime).
So what would you do?
Comments from old blog
You are always writing poetry!
If I were Mr. Perkins, I would give you a 9.5/10!
Your great at math!
I like how you made another poem. Your poems rhyme and most importantly they make sense. I also liked how you added the question at the end. I like how you included both your parents not only your mom. Good job.
Pimrose on September 26, 2012 at 3:37 pm said:
I liked how you asked a question at the end because that is how you get a comments.
I liked this sentence Bake a beautiful delicious cake but I think you can write Bake beautiful delicious cake it would sound pretty with bake beautiful so it has 2 b’s